Reflection
My peers gave me good feedback to think about. One person said she liked how I demonstrated that I have false eyelashes on. One of them told me to include a hook to place the listener in the shoes of the person who has the need. Also, another one of my peers told me to make it appealing to male investors. I thought they were all useful comments. I didn't think about making it appealing to male investors until someone pointed it out that it would be useful.
What I changed
Based on the feedback, I included a hook to place the viewer in the shoes of consumers who have the unmet need. Also, I included why men should be interested in the product.
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