I liked how you were able to demonstrate the false lashes by having them on, and were able to give your personal experience of what your personal solutions have been in the past that were not able to satisfy the need. Overall, you did a great job of selling and explaining your problem and solution.
Hey Cathy! I think that you did a great job of pitching this product. It was awesome how you personally demonstrated how the product actually works. I think that this opportunity would have to in some way really be strong in order to appeal to a male investor. How would you make them see and feel the value in your product as much as you do?
I believe a great hook would be putting the viewer in the shoes of the girl who just had a long day at work, is removing her makeup and eyelashes and has become frustrated bc she can't get glue off of her eyelids. It's always great to out the viewer on the shoes of the person you want to sell too. It helps convey the demand well, and will connect more with the people that have the problem when they see your pitch!
I liked how you were able to demonstrate the false lashes by having them on, and were able to give your personal experience of what your personal solutions have been in the past that were not able to satisfy the need. Overall, you did a great job of selling and explaining your problem and solution.
ReplyDeleteHey Cathy! I think that you did a great job of pitching this product. It was awesome how you personally demonstrated how the product actually works. I think that this opportunity would have to in some way really be strong in order to appeal to a male investor. How would you make them see and feel the value in your product as much as you do?
ReplyDeleteI believe a great hook would be putting the viewer in the shoes of the girl who just had a long day at work, is removing her makeup and eyelashes and has become frustrated bc she can't get glue off of her eyelids. It's always great to out the viewer on the shoes of the person you want to sell too. It helps convey the demand well, and will connect more with the people that have the problem when they see your pitch!
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